Thanks HP for sharing the poem of "Prachi"... I loved her poem... Just took me to some other world for a moment... and i penned down this poem... could link to flow of hers... But I just didnt feel like ending this poem for once..Words were just flowing :) ....
At Times...
At Times…
You feel happy in tons,
But you feel,
Oh so sad at once,
At Times…
At Times…
You just love a color someday,
But some other day,
Dislike the same color in everyway,
At Times…
At Times…
You love someone w/o any reason,
But same love,
Withers away in some other season,
At Times…
At Times…
You fight for the one like your life is at stake,
But someday,
Same someone you so easily forsake,
At Times…
At Times…
You feel so very strong,
But very next moment,
So weak like a mute song,
At Times…
At Times…
You get thru, so lucky,
But other day a broke,
Even when chances are bulky,
At Times…
At Times…
You simply smile,
But for nothing,
Eyes go moist for a while,
At Times…
At Times…
You feel cold under the sun,
But other day,
For no reason it rains in ton,
At Times…
At Times…
You find no tears when you wanna cry,
But for no reason someday,
It just pours, don’t know why,
At Times…
At Times…
You see people as true,
But same ones,
Look oh so fake and new,
At Times…
At Times…
You smile though you are sad,
But other day you go low,
When you should be glad,
At Times…
At Times…
A song takes you to a diff world,
But same song someday,
Gets you all cold,
At Times…
At Times…
You feel you are in love,
But later,
Same feeling feels so hollow…
At Times…
At Times...
You don’t feel lonely alone,
But sometimes even with friends,
You feel you are with none,
At Times…
At Times…
Your faith in Almighty is so high,
But suddenly one day,
You loose it all, tell me why?
At Times…
At Times its strange… But I feel all this… At Times…
_______________________Rashmi(22nd December, 2010)
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ReplyDeleteEven i wished while reading yours ...
That it just goes and goes and keeps going and never ends... :)
But then would also have to say that Prachi one was at a different level altogether :)
Especially the lines
"Sometimes strong..
sometimes weak..
and sometimes just lucky..
even if chances are bleak..
Sometimes you fight like its for your life, and
Sometimes you let it go..without any reason..."
WOWWWW!!!!
They simply BLEW me :) :) :)
And if you have time... Uske aur bhi poems hain...
Although i dont connect to most of them..Mere sar ke kaafi upar se nikalte hain...
But who knows... You might just like them...
So DO check them out :)
And if i am not wrong then kaafi pehle iska ek aur writeup share kiya hoga tere saath...
By the name of 'I KNOW'
Remember ???
That was also ZABARDASSSTTTT...
@ HP
ReplyDelete10/10 for that.. i totally agree.. "Prachis" compliation was at some other level all together.. :)
wow..nice one everyone feels the same at times; and its really very strange at times..
ReplyDeleteThank you people for discussing me on your blog..
ReplyDelete@ Prachi...
ReplyDeleteThats our pleasure... :).. your poem rockss.... indeed :)
@ Rancho...
ReplyDeleteIndeed... 10/10 for that comment....join the gang ;) i thought i am the only one who feels these weird things ;)
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